Sunday, 16 September 2012

New Zealand's Olympic Legends

Go Kiwis!
During the Olympics, I watched the Olympic rowing. Nathan Cohen and Joseph Sullivan won a gold medal.
The 2012 Olympic Games were on!
In the rowing, the Kiwis were going fast at first, then they were going slow, but, at the finish line, the Kiwis came in first place. They got a gold medal. 
I was excited. The Kiwis got a gold medal.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous16 September 2012 at 14:06

    Well Done Emily I enjoyed reading your writing about the rowing, it sounds so exciting. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Anonymous16 September 2012 at 21:03

    Hi Emily,

    Reading your report makes me feel excited about the rowing team. I wish I have watched them.
    I can picture you jumping up and down while you were watching them on your TV.

    Good writing. Well done!!

    From,
    Mrs. McGregor


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  3. Anonymous17 September 2012 at 17:21

    Hi Emily

    I like how you gave your piece of work a title.

    How do you think the rowers were feeling at the start, middle and end of the race?

    Mrs Atkins

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    1. Anonymous23 September 2012 at 18:10

      I think they were feeling nervous at the start of the race.

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  4. Anonymous23 September 2012 at 18:15

    That was amazing and I loved it, Go Kiwis!

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